Fire drill (edit and revise)

Fire drills practice are important to make our school saftey. Firstable, it's important because kindergartener and elementary don't know about fire. Secondable, we need to learn how fire is dangerous, Last, we need to learn about fire drill tools, and we need to learn what do we do when real fire come.

First, it's really important to kindergarten and elementarykids because they don't know about fire, and also they are young. when the kids learn about fire drills and they can try when fire is in the house.
Second, we need to learn how fire is dangerous. Fire drill make us fire is really dangerous. When we really experience that fire come to our school then, we will think that fire is really dangerous and scary.
Last, we need to learn about fire drill tools, and learn about what do we have to do when real fire came to our school for example "stop,drop and roll! and go out side!" They will notice that they should do that when real fire come to our school!

In my opinion, I think fire drills practice are very important to do in our school GSIS. Then we will learn how fire is dangerous, learn about tools and we will learn what we have to do when fire come to our school.